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Will You HAIKU?

mythica
11/11/04 1:12 PM GMT
It’s time for a new literary challenge on Caedes! I think writing Haiku would be both interesting and a challenge. The information below is from (http://home.clara.net/pka/haiku/haiku.htm).

Haiku is a form of poetry popular in Japan, which is becoming more widely appreciated around the world in this century. Haiku writers are challenged to convey a vivid impression in only 17 syllables. Each ‘Haiku’ is divided into 3 lines, of 5 – 7 – 5 syllables.

One of the greatest exponents of this form was Basho (1644-94)

A Haiku by Basho

Waterjar cracks:
I lie awake
This icy night.

In Japan these poems are valued for:
• Their lightness
• Their simplicity
• Their openness
• Their depth

:: PLEASE NOTE :: For variety and interest’s sake – please post between 1-3 Haiku at a time. Really long posts will spoil the very simple and elegant nature of Haiku!

Enjoy and remember 5-7-5 syllables!

My first attempt:

Land no water:
Dry winds blow over
Rain can heal
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There are many paths to the top of the mountain, but the view is always the same. Chinese Proverb........I think you'll really like Chinese Lion. roar.

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