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.BurningSky
02/05/08 5:51 AM GMT
If anyone has some time, I would love some commentary on my shot: Fall Highlands. While the index isn't great, I had some good comments and I liked the shot, so I was reasonably happy with it. I'd like to hear some critical commentary on the shot as a landscape though. I suppose it is not interesting enough? I tried to capture the panoramic view as best as possible (with NIKKOR 18-55)...I think with a better lens that would've been easier. Anyway, thoughts? Thanks in advance :)
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noahnott
02/05/08 6:21 AM GMT
I'll bite:

My version (it's set to private, not public).

I selectively darkened the blues, added contrast to the oranges, and brightened the dark land area. (using photoshop's select --> "color range" and "curves" (curves adds saturation btw)).

In terms of how to make it better with the camera, I'd personally go for the ultra wide angle look by stitching images together (both horizontally and vertically) so there would be more 'perspective'.
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.rozem061
02/05/08 12:26 AM GMT
WOW, Noah, (with al respect for Josh!) this looks much better!
John
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MY PHOTOGRAFIC VISION... I am not an artist, I only let you see with my eyes...!
noahnott
02/06/08 3:06 AM GMT
Thanks. :)
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.BurningSky
03/17/08 3:19 AM GMT
Here's my reworked version without going out and actually shooting it again (that would be tough :p) Think it is an improvement?

Fall Highlands Revisited.

It is hard for me to judge having looked at the picture so much and having the original right next to it. ;)
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.rozem061
03/17/08 5:42 PM GMT
It's much better now, Josh!
You did a great job!, it has now the 'WOW' factor!
Regards!
John
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MY PHOTOGRAFIC VISION... I am not an artist, I only let you see with my eyes...!
.BurningSky
03/17/08 7:55 PM GMT
Thank you John. :)
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