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Uploaded: 12/03/10 3:55 AM GMT
Whirligig
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My attempt at Light on White.
Apophysis and Paint Shop Pro. Constructive critique welcome.

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::sharonva
12/03/10 1:37 PM GMT
I really like this simple, attractive image. You might want to put it full screen.
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"The lyf so short, the craft so long to lerne, Thassay so hard, so sharp the conquering..." Chaucer
.Joanie
12/03/10 5:38 PM GMT
Just beautiful! I might as well take mine out of the contest cause this is perfect!...lol...Excellent work and good luck!
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+purmusic
12/04/10 2:09 PM GMT
Nicely.. done. :o)


Caveats/suggestion(s).

Might have been tempted to simply erase that part of your design/pen tool work ... that creates a merger with the left-hand side frame.

Or..

Perhaps, and as some creative food for thought ... an inset/inlaid 'border' .. to frame things.


Gorgeous colour palette. Most fitting for your idea here, as well as that of a contest entry/submission.

Best of luck in the contest. :o)
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.za4em9
04/01/11 10:19 PM GMT
Oooh, lovely. I like it, its delicacy. Maybe darkening it a bit would make it a little better for the brighter monitors (like mine), but even now it's excellent.
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