the theme and composition are very good, but as deep_sapphire said, a bit out of focus. i think also where it's out of focus makes it worse. had the rest of the shot been blurred, but the extreme foreground sharp...that would have made a much nicer image. go try again..i'll wait here :o)
Woah! I honestly LIKE this shot...favorites material here. The contrast looks gr8, a little outa focus, but i kindof like it slightly out of focus. Also, there is a little grain/specks/something in the image, and yeah...i like it.