When it comes to composition, I always defer to Doug Bays ("snapshoter87"), but he hasn't been on Caedes since last July. That man knows everything about anything to do with photography. Me? I know very little about anything, but I still have an opinion.
I think there's too little moon and too much blue. You need to borrow the Hubble telescope which Richie ("biffobear") uses on his shots.
Dorothy Michaels: No, just Dorothy. Alan's always Alan, Tom's always Tom and John's always John. I have a name too. It's Dorothy, capital D-O-R-O-T-H-Y.