Bruce, your wonderful render and small narrative perform a perfect match. The latter confirms that you've created a rest giving artwork. I have to copy a part of Sandi's comment above because it is very eye pleasing creation too, Buddy!
If you think you can't accept something, try to change it. But if this doesn't work, don't be frustrated, but give it later another try. The one who perseveres wins!
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I could see this one in a corporate atrium environment... You'd be EXTREMELY lucky if you got one of THE$E commissions, as some corporations spend tens of thousands to outdo one another in their decor schemes! Nothing like knowing where the profits are going, right? Excellent job...Faved