Wonderful! See what others say, but I definitely think this is an improvement. I no longer see any roughness or jaggedness. I don't feel strongly either way about the colour, though I haven't compared them side-by-side, but the quality I see as a big improvement. (Worth the render time, I hope.)
Only one thing: I _believe_ this is in the wrong gallery. I think this gallery is intended for reworks by persons other than the original artists and that revisions by the original artists are meant to go in the normal gallery. So much has changed that I'm not sure this hasn't too, so you might want to check if you haven't already. (Read: don't take my word for it, please!)
I was so interested in the first version of this that I saved it in my fractal folder on my hard drive. I saw your rework and kicked the other one out and put this one in...excellent, and I'm going to remember this when next I do a render. It was well worth it ...
Only one thing: I _believe_ this is in the wrong gallery. I think this gallery is intended for reworks by persons other than the original artists and that revisions by the original artists are meant to go in the normal gallery. So much has changed that I'm not sure this hasn't too, so you might want to check if you haven't already. (Read: don't take my word for it, please!)
Well done - great job, I think.
- cfr