This one is very interesting! I like close-ups like this of things that normally just slide past the eye. The focus area seems to be fairly small...would prefer 3 inches further way and more to see. Compositionally this one is great. I don't like glare in the center of a picture, and I think the subject could be lighted nearly as well with a more filtered light source.
Great work Frankie... wonderful closeup, good lighting, agree with Les above.. the only thing to correct is the sharpness apart from that you are doing excellent work...
i like this because it's abstract. had you not told what it was i would not have known. you'll do well because you photograph lots of different things. if you ever have anything i can help you with, be sure to let me know! good luck! jen