Is the poem an original? I think it works really well with the image. My only suggestion would be to consider shifting the poen a little to the right to leave some space for desktop icons. Otherwise, quite impressive. :)
Yeah. I ended up moving my icons to the other side when i used it as my wallpaper. I don't know how i'd feel aobut moving the text though. I guess that's somthing i'll remember for next time.
I'm really into goth rock and new wave. My favorite band is The Birthday Massacre. The guy in my avatar is, in fact, a guy. His name is Mana from the band Malice Mizer.