I took the liberty of doing a quickee edit on your shot. I like the idea, but the composition seems off to me. I personally would have taken a few steps back to include more beach and less sky. I would have also taken a few steps to the right. I would have included all three ships but as much of the "50" marker as possible. Since I can't change the overall composition, I added some sharpness and color saturation as well as a couple of clicks of contrast as well as one click of negative gamma to add some drama to the sky. Let me know what you think of this.
Roger