I can see why you took this photo because the scene is lovely. This kind of photo works best when the light is soft which rarely happens in the middle of the day, especially in the tropics. If you get the chance take a similar one in the late afternoon, I’m sure you will be pleased by the result :-)
Nice perspective on a tropical picture. A little on the bright side, which created some blurring. Also couple reflective glow dots in center of image. Maybe darken or try a warming effect on the lighting (imo) Nice effort.