Though this seems a little bit grainy the colours work well together and I really like the flowing swirls of light. It reminds me of a fun dance. And I love to dance!
mary
It is a little grainy, although I'm not sure that's a particularly bad thing in this case because it is fairly even and creates a dusty texture I find rather appealingly different. The colours work well and I like the contrast between the brighter colours in the foreground and the subtler, darker colours behind as this seems to accentuate the sense of depth. It looks like some sort of bizarre radio/radar type signal (of an altogether non-radio/non-radar sort) at the back emanating "real" stuff - as though it is the source of matter. Energy -> matter (E=mc2?!)
Very nicely done. It really would be better to render larger images, though. I use a 12" laptop which is not the smallest, but pretty small. My screen is at 1024x768 so even with my desktop, this would be too small. Rendering at 3200x2400, scaling down to 1600x1200 and uploading the result seems to be a pretty good strategy - it will get you all the standard desktop sizes and, by rendering bigger and scaling down, it will also help to address issues of graininess.
Feel free to send me a pm if you have questions. (Don't know much, but might be able to help with this particular issue!)
Also - and this isn't a criticism of the image or you or anything, but just a "heads up" - I do not really understand your description. I know you've done a better job than I could in anything other than English, but I just thought you might want to know. I don't see it as a problem - the image stands on its own just fine.
Keep up the good work - you've really done a very good job with this.
mary