Was curious as to how the colour would be in these type of shots.
Now ... I know. :oD
Ahem ...
Not having been there, curious about your composition.
I am kind of, sort of ... liking the inclusion of the reflection of the exit sign. Perhaps, I am thinking too much on this one ... seems to be some editorial content with it in the image.
That said, and in my humble opinion ... think a crop would still be in order.
Or, clone out the reflected sign.
Just did both to have a look. And without the exit sign, and as composed as you have presented it to us here ... works well.
Add some contrast adjustment to minimize the glass/window reflection overall ... and done.
Allll that said ... and without any changes and in full view size, the visual impact is more profound. There's some great geometric lines contained within ... complimented by the line of sights of the gazes of the manequins.
Good shot.
And I certainly appreciate some fresh imagery and takes.
On that note, and for your creative efforts ... thank you for this look.