This is the first entry I've seen so far that captures my idea of what pop art "should" look like. I'm not too sure about the subject, as I think a pop art subject should be iconic, if you see what I mean (ie, reflect "popular" culture). Not that I have a degree in the arts or anything, this is just my understanding. But you are definitely on the right track here.
Going barefoot is the gentlest way of walking, and can symbolize a way of living.It's the feeling of enjoyment beneath our toes...it removes the barrier between us and nature...(AdeleCoombs,Barefoot
Dreaming)
I like your composition and colours but i think it looks better in smal res than in high beause you can see the "cutting lines" less.Still its verry pop art .
I think the whole idea was to have the choppy lines with this one. To me pop art is not supposed to be perfect, but then again to each his own taste. I like it.