So simple and yet so effective. I think obeying the rule of thirds might have helped it more if applied here, but the subject couldn't be more properly taken.
"I never looked for it, gave it no name; yet I knew it always, when the gift of peace came. I stood quite still for the moment that it lasted...Then the light shifted slightly and the moment passed, leaving me...with the lasting echo of its presence.." Diana Gabaldon