Nice contemporary abstract art. I don't see awkwardness here so I'd probably change the name to something like "gently falling". Speaking of names, I just saw your gallery and I think there's lots of class.
While I was making the picture, I actually was using a black background. It had a interesting neon effect, but I was going for more of a brighter, foggy effect. I'm thinking of making a neon-style picture with a black background soon.
I was looking at this again, and what I am truly enjoying with your creations is the way the 'sheets' of colour enter in and out of each other. Very smoothe movement and the colours here are soft and easy on the eyes. Thanx...so much. Verena