I too am drawn to the movement in water. I also find it very hard to convey in a still picture the enjoyment even a small ripple can bring. The play of light is good here, but perhaps a color adjustment or playing with the contrasts would be something that might bring this to a viewer's eye in a more attractive way. I'm still struggling with this type of post, so that's the best I can do for constructive criticism! :)PJ
"I never looked for it, gave it no name; yet I knew it always, when the gift of peace came. I stood quite still for the moment that it lasted...Then the light shifted slightly and the moment passed, leaving me...with the lasting echo of its presence.." Diana Gabaldon
Anything that excites me for any reason, I will photograph; not searching for unusual subject matter, but making the commonplace unusual.
Edward Weston