Hello Ashley and welcome to Caedes. I like this image allot, I think you did a very nice job. However I have a suggestion, I think it would have been better if you left the color in the eyes. With the way it is know when you look at the picture in full-size you see a beautiful face, but There’s nothing drawing emphasis and my eyes wondered off looking to your left at the car door and window. I feel if you left the color in the eyes, they would stick out very nicely and keep the viewer focused on her/your face. Still a good picture and I hope you don't mind my criticism.
-Chris