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Uploaded: 09/08/10 9:12 PM GMT
Earl Surfer 2 -Redone
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Thanks to the wonderful advice, I redid this photo. Any better? Thank ahead of time for any comments.

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::Genver
09/08/10 9:20 PM GMT
Very good action picture,the wave is impressive,pleasant lighting as well.
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::luckyshot
09/08/10 10:03 PM GMT
Adrienne - The surfer is clearly the focus of this shot as he is engulfed in the wave. There is a nice sense of action in the photo. Thad
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::tigger3
09/08/10 10:12 PM GMT
Very good rework, and so glad you decided to try it. Well done, I like this one better. Tigs♥ =^..^=

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::busybottle
09/09/10 1:15 AM GMT
Adie
I kinda liked the other but who am I to argue. This one is still a great image! Great action shot!
Paul
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I ate a porcupine and..... it hurts!
::Jimbobedsel
09/09/10 1:47 AM GMT
You just wanted to give the women a better look at the surfer. LOL.
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DUH
::PhilipCampbell
09/09/10 1:53 AM GMT
Okay this is all about learning, right. Now that I see the finished work I just don't know. I could say "great job", and move on, but that wouldn't be honest feedback. This one doesn't feel quite right either. In the rule of thirds this should work, but still something is missing. Maybe to move him right, maybe not that much, and keep most or all of the front wave. When I'm cropping like that it's all about feel. I just move them around till it feels right. And I don't know the final outcome till I try many positions. You're a good sport.
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::SEFA
09/09/10 7:30 PM GMT
I think you did very well on the rework. I like this one too.
I still think a little more brightness and contrast would make it even better, but that´s just me.
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SEFA
::biffobear
09/09/10 7:38 PM GMT
It's good but the other was better..He needs some space to surf into and that front wave gave it depth...R.
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.koca
09/09/10 9:32 PM GMT
Interesting shot, good idea shooting this surfer. I like it.
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::Silvanus
09/10/10 2:10 AM GMT
I'd also agree that you should leave some space in front of the surfer. However, this is a very nice action shot. The timing is terrific, and you couldn't have posed the surfer any better than this.

— Steve
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::Heroictitof
09/10/10 7:52 AM GMT
This wave looks very impressive in this rework !!
Very well done Adrienne !
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.Tedi
09/11/10 12:27 AM GMT
I like this photo, beautiful, good surfer.
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.icedancer
09/13/10 6:41 PM GMT
Really like this one Gabi, wonderful rework
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