The lipstick seems a bit uneven, and there seems to be an excessive hardware problem. She seems to have a very pretty face, why would she want to distract from it with all that extra makeup and painful piercings?
Nice technique with the pic though. I like it when there are black and white pics with just a hint of color in them. I did that with "Ageless".
One of the few instances where selective desaturation really works in a portrait. It tends to lend a starker, goth appearance to your subject. Good job.
Man's heart away from nature becomes hard. ~Standing Bear ***** I believe in God, only I spell it "Nature" ~Frank Lloyd Wright, quoted, 14 August 1966 **** With innovation and technology, seems we have forgotten to cherish the true beauty the world has to offer. ~A.C. Van Cherub