Hmmm...I though I had commented here, but I see I didn't. You do nice work and it's refreshing to see an illustration drawn for a poetry assignment. Maybe you could send along the poetry somehow?
"I never looked for it, gave it no name; yet I knew it always, when the gift of peace came. I stood quite still for the moment that it lasted...Then the light shifted slightly and the moment passed, leaving me...with the lasting echo of its presence.." Diana Gabaldon
So I am definetly not the person to comment on drawings considering my stick men look like...well not stick men lol. But Caedes.net called and I will answer. I like how the chain design continues up on to the edge of the watch, and how some of the chains are spread out, and some are bunched together, just like real life. Great drawing.