This isn't the best shot in terms of composition but the distorted sense of scale is very interesting. It looks like the people in the background have been shrunk!
I love it when people think outside of the box....regardless of whether it is a success or not the fact that you have tried something imaginative wins you big browny points with me :) I do agree with Samatar that the distorted sense of scale is very puzzling. I have spent ages trying to work out if the people are really tiny or if this place is massive!!! I also love that you have put it into black and white. When you have a lot of different things going on in a picture often the detail that colour provides can distract from the subject matter. Much more arty this way! Dont stop being creative!
He who dwells in the shelter of the Most High will rest in the shadow of the almighty. I will say of the Lord, "He is my refuge and my fortress, my God in whom i trust". Psalm 91: 1 and 2