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Uploaded: 11/13/11 5:01 PM GMT
Journey Across the Salt-flats
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::lilu103
11/13/11 5:23 PM GMT
How cool! This is great, I particularly love the moon! I think the scene might have a slight bit more emotional impact if you cloned out the 2nd person tho... Awesome image :))
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::lmass
11/13/11 5:43 PM GMT
The moon, the clouds, the birds, the darkness. What a powerful combo. I agree with Lisa that the 2nd person is distracting.
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------Lynne M.
.Sinestro
11/13/11 6:06 PM GMT
I kind of Like the Second Person's attendance... as It adds some Mystery to The 'Story'... all the Other elements Are astounding!
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::casechaser
11/13/11 11:25 PM GMT
I too do not think the second person is distracting. But, rather, another layer in the story unfolding before our eyes.

When I am reading a novel, I am grateful that it has the depth of more than one good chapter.
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.ReesesCup
11/15/11 2:25 AM GMT
Gorgeous! I love the lightning, the bird, the moon and..well everything about this picture! I don't think the second person is distracting...it looks ghostly to me. Great job.
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"It seems every imaginary friend I've ever had i have had to kill them at one point or another..."
Logun7
11/15/11 5:43 PM GMT
Some places speak distinctly. Certain dank gardens cry aloud for a murder; certain old houses demand to be haunted; certain coasts are set apart for shipwrecks. ~Robert Louis Stevenson

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The most precious jewel you'll ever have around your neck are the arms of your children♥
::dreamer100
11/20/11 12:56 AM GMT
I see a desolate destroyed city in the distance a la Cormac McCarthy. Even the redness of the mist adds an air of apocalypse
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