I think you could brighten the highlights just a little bit without ruining the sun’s gone look. Mind you it’s nice to see a sunset that doesn’t burn your eyes out too. I really like your composition. It’s the kind of photo I like to make when I have time to go find them.
I agree with Robert. You do have a VERY good, Eli, my only suggestion to you is don't be afraid to play with a COPY (never the original) of your picture in whatever software you have to come up with different looks. Nice post!
"'Life is not a journey to the grave with the
intention of arriving safely in a pretty
and well preserved body,
but rather to skid in broadside,
thoroughly used up,
totally worn out,
and loudly proclaiming,
"WOW! What a ride!"'