I missed seeing your previous shot, but I like this one. The rich and varied greens of the hillside form a beautiful backdrop and there's a lot of interest going on in the shot - drawing the eye around and back again. The people are well observed and the hint of the shore and the continuing coastline form an added interest. I think I would have liked to have seen a little more of the foreground, particularly in the lower left, and perhaps a little less sky in consequence, but no doubt you had reasons for excluding it. Overall, a very pleasant shot.
It's a good shot but I do agree that the horizon is a bit off. It tilts and the monument is not straight up. Fix that and you have a nice image. - Kirk