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Uploaded: 05/06/08 2:37 PM GMT
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.angelledaemon
05/09/08 1:56 PM GMT
very nice
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Angelle "because reality isn't nearly as fun."
.mapbc
05/09/08 3:38 PM GMT
I'm going to be critical, but I mean it as constructive criticism. Please take it as such.

You don't have a strong subject here. The shadows are a little overwhelming and there is some dirt on either the lens or the sensor (in the sky).

The dirt can be cloned out in photo software like photoshop.

The other issues are more about deciding what you want to take a picture of.

The clouds are interesting, the colors are well processed. But think about what you want people to see in the picture and see if it's coming across how you want it. If not maybe find another way to shoot it.
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::gaeljet2
05/09/08 3:42 PM GMT
i understand but i like it this way which is a pleasant view , simply that..
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::photog024
05/13/08 4:44 PM GMT
i'm afraid i agree totally with ".mapbc" there should be, in every picture, a point of focus. something in the photo should be in focus. you didn't get that here, i agree that it is a pleasant view, but we don't know which part of the scene to concentrate on. you should think more of your audience in your scene rather than what you want. i hope you don't think we pick
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