Okay. So I'll "tell you"!! I like the composition, but if this were mine, I'd try to up the saturation and contrast a bit to bring out the blues. I'm not sure what happened with the foreground over on the right, but it seems a bit blurry to me.
We don’t make art to show someone what something looks like. All this requires is eyes (or a lens). Art is supposed to have meaning, emotion, power, or magic. Alan & Mario "FourThirds"
I cant help feeling this would be better in a landscape format, slightly wider and less sky and cut out the whatever it is at the bottom. The middle part of the picture is good.
26/10/08 15:50
[complain] [message] Okay. So I'll "tell you"!! I like the composition, but if this were mine, I'd try to up the saturation and contrast a bit to bring out the blues. I'm not sure what happened with the foreground over on the right, but it seems a bit blurry to me.
it s a bit of wood on the floor used as a bench you see what i mean? it not the point of the photo that s why it s blurred
:)PJ