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Uploaded: 02/17/09 10:21 AM GMT
down by the lake
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::crysophilax
02/20/09 6:57 AM GMT
To me the balance of the picture is wrong. I like the shorelines but the cut off rock bottom right is wrong, the tree puts too much weight on the right, and breaks up the bridge, and I think the colours look a little dull. This may be how they were, but we do make pictures here and not necessarily post perfect reality so a little tweaking is allowed. The large blank sky does not help.

It is a nice picture, but I feel that is it. just a nice picture and nothing special. There is no focus. What is the subject? Even scenic views like this need a focus point that holds the viewer. In this one my eyes just wander all over and move on looking for something to photograph.

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::gaeljet2
02/20/09 10:50 AM GMT
subject = vista, nature
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::solita17
02/21/09 4:01 AM GMT
Actually, if you can wade through Chris's bluntness there are a lot of good suggestions to be had... Your composition does need balance.
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