We don’t make art to show someone what something looks like. All this requires is eyes (or a lens). Art is supposed to have meaning, emotion, power, or magic. Alan & Mario "FourThirds"
I like the choice of subjects here in this photo. The flower is unnaturally well-formed and symmetric. I like too the way your background is distinct but enough out of focus to not be a distraction. You should know though that the bar in flower photography is abnormally high, because the competition are so numerous.