I've never seen parents use a pencil on their child's eye's. I wonder how the baby liked that? My grand daughters won't sit still to get their hair combed. They'd probably be missing an eye if my daughters tried to put eye liner around their eyes. The baby does look very sweet.
Lovely portrait and composition, Jen. One item, more than one catch-light in a eye is always a distraction. That tiny white circular spot in the child's right eye should be cloned out.