Pretty cool! I like the use of the biblical verses. I wish the background wasn't quite so blue though...so we could see more of what the layers show. I think they're people? But yeah, very cool start! I think it's very good. Keep it up!
-Laurel

A very different sort of posting, but glad that you did it...thank you so much...

interesting idea- alright for a first attempt like dr.pepper I like the bible verses and the blue is a good idea but theres too much int he background distracting from the main focal point which is the verses. good work though

I agree with DrPepper.... the backbround is a little too blue..maybe try adding another color in there somewhere... I think some lighting and/or some kind of texture might look nice in the background too.....maybe also try using a different font...something easier to read ..... your concept is good but it needs some work...but for your first time you did a pretty good job..keep at it im sure you will improve :)

Thanks so much for all the feedback. I'll try and see if I can put some different colors into it.

COOL and EXCELLENT !!!

Nice idea, but i feel it is hard to see the background with those layes on the top. Despite this i think that there needs to be a uniform colour so that the text is not lost. Interesting post - ill look forward to what you submit next!

AWSome!
I love the biblcal text.
But it was a little hard to read.