There's a lot going on in this scene. My only thought is that because you have such a large format pic, that it might be nice to crop in on it a bit more tightly if the focus is there, so as to present the details to your viewers.
We don’t make art to show someone what something looks like. All this requires is eyes (or a lens). Art is supposed to have meaning, emotion, power, or magic. Alan & Mario "FourThirds"