due to condition i think you did well. The composition really works for me but i think the colors and levels could be kicked up a notch in ps (or another editor). Nice shot though!
Let me echo the other commenters by saying yes, the detailing and in-out focus of the flowers is quite pretty. It's a good shot. I would like to see though perhaps in one of your future flower pics, say, something interesting or random happening on one of the plants or in the background. Like, a similar capture of this quality and depth, but, I don't know, a spider carrying away a ladybug on the third petal clockwise from midnight, or the Berlin wall being taken down in the distance. Hope that helps!