hi, i was brought here the site in a 'comment request'. i like what (i think) you were trying to accomplish here, but the shot might've (much) more effective from a slightly higher point of view (standing instead of squatting, for example) and shooting in a slightly more downward direction. i'd also like to see a little bit of clearance between the top of the highest weeds, and the upper edge of the frame. I hope this helps, and thanks for sharing your work.
Rob
Hi,my name is Rob..ok, so I'm not the greatest at replies and comments. Sorry. For anyone needing to contact me, my email is back up in my profile. >> my cluttered mess of a gallery
I gotta agree with third-eye. This image needs something more in it than the wheat. I'll give you one thing. It's obvious you tried for a other than the everyday "usual" perspective and that is good. This image just isn't exciting euff. Keep shooting. I know the area of the country you live in. I was born and raised in dayton and went to school at Kent State. There is plenty gorgeous scenery around you. Go for it.
Pat
As with the others I feel a slightly higher viewpoint would have been more beneficial. This makes me feel slightly claustrophobic [but that may have been what you were trying to achieve;o)] Full marks for experimenting, and of course, this is only my point of view. Others may totally disagree. Keep going - in your profession you can't have a lot of spare time.
Cheers,
Steve.
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Rob