What isn't working about it? One thing I really like about your bird pictures is that they are in the wild, not from a bird sanctuary where all the convenient limbs and branches are well suited for perching and in good light. Here this bird is gripping the too-narrow branch with both feet, and it is interesting to see how he solves this enironmental problem. I like the light coming from below...give me the feeling that he is up nice and high.