I like the fun atmosphere of this photo, but I do have some critique, if you don't mind.

If there's one thing I've learned about motion photography is angle. For a shot like this, I think taking the shot from a side view (opposed to the back) would make it a more interesting shot, and would also increase the depth of the piece. That's pretty much all :)

Hope that helped a little.

I agree with Bethany, a side angle would have been better, unless... you waited a second and got the child splash landing in the water, then that would have been great from any angle!

Agree with above. I would like to have seen the child's face as well - you had a good eye to see the photo op in this - a child + a puddle! i know zilch about motion photography so can't offer much there, but I do see where there is potential in this shot and yes - a "splashdown" would've been fun! ( as long as you and your camera stayed dry! )
Kat

cool photo, good job

Wheeee! Looks like fun. Too bad You can't see the persons face, but all in all a good photo.

must have been togh, especially because the person seems jumping so high..!lol otherwise i don t really care with the critics above, even though for other photos it could be good, since wwith this one the person is the real point and that we see it well, on the contrary i woyuld have even rathered it btter if we would have seen it s head