The original badly needed an increase in contrast amongst other things. Increased level of green colour channel, and lightened the ladybug on the bottom with Dodge tool. Also recropped at little.
Wow, David! This is a great closeup. You seem to have a really good eye and technique for photography for such a young guy. I can't wait to look at your other photos. By the way, this is going in my favs!
Wonderful job on this photo. It's great that you shared what you changed and how - gives this newbie some tips! Excellent color, crisp and bright. Detail is very good and the subject matter ... well ... it's (they're) lovely!
Oh and, so THAT'S what they do at the ladybug picnic!
Oops ... "ladybug picnic" - might have to be from the US or Canada AND be pretty old to know where that reference comes from? A Sesame Street (children's television show) song.