I love the pictures, especially the water lapping over the rocks, but I think that they could have been composed and rendered better, maybe a little more transition between images.

Hmm... I liked the stark contrast between the images when I saw this in the VB. Evokes a pleasant emotion and the images are crisp and clear. Nice presentation. Well done.

seems disjointed. what may have made 2 interesting images separately is a little jumbled when put together.

It's just an interpretive piece really. It's not meant to look like one image..I wanted the same two images at the side to act as a form of border to the central image and also portray the sense of fragility in a relationship..ie. the sea coming ashore to wash them and their memory away..