"I wrote your name on a piece of paper but by accident I threw it away...
I wrote your name on my hand but it washed away...
I wrote your name in the
sand but the waves whisked it away....
I wrote your name in my heart and forever it will stay........."
I like this image . The subject is well composed, but it would have more impact if the rule of thirds was used here.
The rule of thirds is that you take the image and divide it into thirds, both vertically and horizontally and wherever the lines intersect is a good place to put your main subject. Try it; I think you will like the results.