Well, the orange/red on blue stands out a lot, but it's smack dab in the center of the image. Move it a little to the side, use rule of thirds, and the horizon is also dividing the composition, not good. Maybe if you tilted the camera so make it a little more angular and move the camera up or down so the horizon doesn't cut through the center of the image. And I agree with .just in zooming in a little on the subject.
My critic goes to your work, not you! Don't take things personally.
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