Nice composition here & a beautiful gal. I do like the DOF with the RR tracks faintly visible, but I'd prefer more contrast in that I believe it would perhaps bring out the model's hair & facial features more. As I see it she blends in with the background ... I'm thinking tone down the midtones & shadows more. I do like the bit of color you left in & the title fits perfectly. Nice work Rich & nice to see something different from you.
Prettiest "Perils of Pauline" I have ever seen Gonzo. I suspect you gave it this dreamy look for a reason. Now get her off the tracks before ...............
I really look forward to your posts. :)
I think Sherree has some good ideas... I like her hippie attitude, and the way her head is cocked, and I like the way the railroad tracks disappear into soft focus...
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