I sure like the idea and drama of this. The multiple (14 or more) catchlights in the eye which is a primary focal point, are rather distracting, Rob. As the eyes are the single most important feature in a portrait, all but one catchlight is always retouched or now cloned out. It's a lot easier now, and here you can just clone out all of them, and insert a single one where it best fits the direction of the head and eye.
An interesting close up of the eye Rob. A great look of boredom in the image. I'd like to image the spots in the eye form the reflection of a face of what appears to be a bearded man.