Nice post. It is a bit out of focus, unless that was your intent, and needs to be strainghtened a bit, but the general idea and composition are excellent!
"'Life is not a journey to the grave with the
intention of arriving safely in a pretty
and well preserved body,
but rather to skid in broadside,
thoroughly used up,
totally worn out,
and loudly proclaiming,
"WOW! What a ride!"'
Rich