This upload makes me giddy! I want to make it straight! Its like im looking at it sideways but im not cos its already sideways :S LOL I personally feel that this needs more contrast. It is a very interesting shot with some original composition but i feel that the dull sky and lack of tonal range is letting in down somewhat. If you have photoshop or Paintshop Pro i suggest messing with the contrast settings to make the whole thing a bit bolder. Love your out of the box thinking with the angle though!