It's a good action shot. Tinytoes is right about the lighting. It would be sweet if you got some tracer's or motion blur going on the cards, but other than that, interesting subject.
B&W doesn't do anything for me with this, sorry. For ad graphic maybe bring him up a little. Love the shadows, but right cards are a little blown out. Great idea -- play around some more...
This was shot in a college computer lab sadly so the black and white was really just from the need to get rid of the ugly reddish wall behind him. And your right the cards definatley didn't turn out perfect.