This is a photo of part of the entrance to the burned/abandoned Carnegie mansion on Cumberland Island Ga. We were there over Christmas this last year. What a beautiful place.
Yes, the composition is good, John. And as an abstract it is very good. It doesn't really show as an abandoned structure, and the reflections and frame in the upper right corner create a distraction to the form and beauty of the vegetation which has overgrown the site. That can stand proud on it's own merits with the minor distractions cloned over on the upper right with the surrounding vegetation.