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Heart Storm
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Heart Storm

You have become
the storm in my heart
I feel as though I am the red kite
tumbling in a sapphire colored sky gliding happily over the sea
resonating in silent surrender
as you walk within my mind

You are the raging sea
frolicking yet gently moving
as does the tide that
laps upon the shore
you calm my evening sunset
as its apricot fires burn
upon every fiber of my heart

Your words are the curl
in the thunder before the rain
when it ripples gently
across the rolling hills
filling valleys and mountains
with purpled green shadows
upon shores of eternal spring

You have entered my life
as the ivory coloured albatross
smooth it glides upon breezes
being carried by whispers
taken to lands of fantasy
places of whimsy and dreams
always searching for tomorrow

Today you are my springtime
caressing me with scents of jasmine you have brought softness
into my early evening silence
brought enchantment to my heart
now, please, allow me to
give the same gift to you

by Verena

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::Hottrockin
01/18/10 10:25 AM GMT
Whadda hott display of beaming color!! This one sizzles!!
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Why do the pictures come out square when the lens is round??
::biffobear
01/18/10 12:01 AM GMT
Wow that's some hot pic...But the poem for me says it all.You have a lot of passion in your odes.....Rx
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Light travels faster than sound. This is why some people appear bright until they speak
::Roseman_Stan
01/18/10 2:11 PM GMT
Amazing creation here Lady V. Well done.

Stan
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“Won't you come into the garden? I would like my roses to see you” - Richard Brinsley Sheridan
::0930_23
01/18/10 2:50 PM GMT
Good work with creations. Both visually and internally.

☼ 2010 ☼


TicK
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Hopefully my photos and stories will let you know what makes me Tick
::Jimbobedsel
01/18/10 3:24 PM GMT
Looks like you are getting ready for Valentine's Day, Verena. Gorgeous creation.

Jimbob
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I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE.
.Jhihmoac
01/18/10 4:21 PM GMT
Bloooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!



This is simply Boo'ful! Gotta be a theme for Valentine's next month...Nothing like getting an early start! (LOL) Nice presentation...and great poetry/prose...Favs!
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"If there's any illusion you may have of a bright and shining center of the universe...then I'm from the farthest and darkest place from it..." - Visit Jhihmoac's Gallery
::Joanie
01/18/10 4:30 PM GMT
Beautiful color and design in this Verena!! An outstanding poem that matches it beautifully!
Joanie
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.SatCom
01/18/10 5:26 PM GMT
My favorite to date. Love the hearts and the hot reds. I hope things are going well for you.
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Sometimes I do get to places just when God's ready to have somebody click the shutter. - Ansel Adams....... My Gallery
.gizmo1
01/18/10 6:28 PM GMT
It looks to me like a lot of love hearts descending to earth to spread there love. Well done nice piece of art work.
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.jazzilady
01/18/10 6:40 PM GMT
Wow! That's really hot!! Love it, the colors are so vibrant and the composition is really great!
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.Starglow
01/19/10 1:47 AM GMT
That sweetheart day is coming up and you have designed a beautiful image and poem. You are a Sweetheart alright.
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::Logun7
01/19/10 2:07 AM GMT
Wow!! Great wonderful red hearts and a beautiful poem!!! Outstanding Miss V:))
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every day is a gift......that's why it's called the present!!
::casechaser
01/19/10 3:37 AM GMT
What a beautiful combination of originals. Passions are burning in the heart of hearts.
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.Eubeen
01/19/10 6:59 AM GMT
A wonderful design Verena. Love the painted brush stroke effects and that beautiful glowing light. Lovely poem and creation. ~Wendell
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In order to discover who you are, first learn who everybody else is; you're what's left.
::twinkel
01/19/10 7:30 PM GMT
Words and picture goes very well together. Beautiful work Verena.

+favs for me.
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If you cant accept me at my worst, then you don't deserve me at my best.
::Inkeri
01/19/10 11:19 PM GMT
A Beautiful creation,Verena.Lovely design.
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::tealeaves
01/22/10 4:38 AM GMT
This reminds me of those hot cinnamon candies, as they first touch your tongue they are sweet, then closer to the center a burst of intense heat, but satisfying all the same! Love the fiery colours and sweet flow to this beauty! I also love your poem and how it bursts with feeling just like your creation! Fantastic work my friend! :)
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*Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep. ~Scott Adams*
.diaz3508
01/22/10 6:11 PM GMT
All I can say is ......Gorgeous ....
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Jellybean

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