If you didn't provide us with this brief narrative, I would have questioned whether your feet stayed dry, Raj, ☺ ! Could be a good contender for the current contest!
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Looks like a 'slippery slope' downwards and one would have to be cautious...a good look 'seen from above' and it would make a fitting contest entry tho' it's always tricky to second guess yourself and change your entry...sometimes it's a good move and sometimes not:)...personally I feel your current entry is the better one...anyhow, great shot and good luck should this be your entry.
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Could be a good contender for the current contest!