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Ended 03/14/12 3:15 AM GMT
Winner: LynEve
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1st place casechaser: Congrats Lyn!
LakeMichigan: Congratulations on winning the Time contest . Nicely done.
icedancer: Magnificent entry and really do like this. Good Luck
tigger3: I think this is an excellent entry. =^..^=tigs
nanadoo: Congrats on the win! I love it!
purmusic: Really nice, Lyn.
Caveats?
Undecided, really.. as to whether the crop is a tad tight.
And it has not gone unnoticed by me, that you were working with the physical constraints/size of the wood top. Just can't quite shake the thought of a bit more breathing room to the right of the rose might be an improvement.
That said..
Good good control and handle on the technical considerations. Lighting is nice, too.
p.s. Then, it hits me.. the size of the sides of your border/framing.
See if the following joke reference makes sense..
As an added punishment for prisoners.. jail house authorities are considering placing the bars on the prison inmate uniforms.. horizontal.
('Cause.. then the prisoners would go around thinking that they are 'fat'. :oP)
To my eyes, and mind.. with the border width/size at the sides as presented.. kind of, sort of ... fights with the vertical lines of the bottle and the hanging watches.
Downloaded and cropped on the above thought(s) ... looks better?
LynEve received a 2 month membership in the Caedes Cadre.
2nd place LakeMichigan: Congratulations on the Time contest.
Starry173: I like the lack of focus that shows the future is yet unknown.
Tom
rvdb: Congrats on your win Chris.
Rob
Digital_Angel: Chris,
I like this image a lot, from the muted colors to the composition.
I do have two crits though:
1. Not sure if you could do this, but if the DoF were a little longer into the clock from the 12 towards the center I think it would cut a little into the mainly blurry image, creating a little more depth and visual interest.
2. The area in focus could be sharpened a little, which helps with crit #1
Just my opinion of course :)
coram9 received a 1 month membership in the Caedes Cadre.
3rd place captaindrewi: A great concept this should do well in the contest.
0930_23: Congrats on your 3rd win in the contest. Great entry.
TicK
mesmerized: This is really a beautiful and well done creation...quite a unique take on the Time contest...great job and best of luck.
5th place
100k_xle: So sorry to hear the bad news of War Casualties. Way too young to die so soon. I'll say a Prayer for them.
E J
Dunstickin: A wonderful sombre moment of remembrance!
Thank you for this!
0930_23: Such a waste men dying in wars in this day and age BC. A very great tribute to both them and your Grandad.
TicK