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Contest Results: Time

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Ended 03/14/12 3:15 AM GMT
Winner: LynEve (See the full results)

1st place
Time In A Bottle by LynEve

LakeMichigan: Congratulations on winning the Time contest . Nicely done.

Jimbobedsel: Congrats on your 1st place in the contest, Lyn. That sure is a great shot. I love that song, and all of Jim Croce's work. He would have had many many more great songs if he hadn't died way back in the 70's.

LynEve received a 2 month membership in the Caedes Cadre.

2nd place
Time Passing by coram9

LakeMichigan: Congratulations on the Time contest.

casechaser: Congrats on your win, Chris.

rvdb: Congrats on your win Chris.

Rob

Digital_Angel: Chris,

I like this image a lot, from the muted colors to the composition.

I do have two crits though:

1. Not sure if you could do this, but if the DoF were a little longer into the clock from the 12 towards the center I think it would cut a little into the mainly blurry image, creating a little more depth and visual interest.

2. The area in focus could be sharpened a little, which helps with crit #1

Just my opinion of course :)

coram9 received a 1 month membership in the Caedes Cadre.

3rd place
A Month in the Life of the Moon by Akeraios

purmusic: Really nice work, Hannah.


If I may.. composition.

In my humble opinion, think you could make some 'minor' (on the notes of your concept and overall presentation) changes.

Moon ... smaller.

Allowing for the Xaos fractal to provide stronger leading lines within frame, prodding your viewer's eyes to look into your piece.. deeper. As they are a nice touch.

Add some more depth, in short.

And in turn, knock down the moon's prominence (visual weight), too.


Will summarize my thoughts here.. in a popular phrasing..

'+favs for me.'


Best of luck in the contest with this very strong creative contender. :o)

5th place
A Time to Remember by johindes

wheedance: What a wonderful remembrance. And congrats.

rvdb: Congrats on your win.

Rob

LynEve: The thoughful dedication Jo. They were so young.
Such a waste of young lives.

I like the photo of your proud grandda