The shot linked below currently has a 53. It is what it is. What I'm seeking here, is insight as to what might be improved upon it, or what it's lacking. If it was just a difference in taste, well, I'll just take my lumps and go. Since it was one of my personal favorites, I'd really like to know if I'm just not "seeing" something. Thanks in advance.

And please...serious replies for this one.

Exhibit A